I WANT TO TURN THE PAGE!

Good suspense writing technique for ending a chapter. Definitely makes the reader want to turn the page. 

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Devon’s pleasant, middle-class street was peaceful. No one was trying to murder her, or Tyson, or me, but this was about to change.

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“Was” is considered a weak verb in good writing. Stronger, more descriptive verbs are recommended.  But, Crais has rhythm, and it works here.

From, The Wanted, by Robert Crais, one of my favorite crime-thriller authors.

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