EYES. [Leiter writing tips]
An interesting take on “eyes,” so different from the usual clichés. From the action thriller, White Plague, by James Abel.
…Whoever said, Eyes are the windows of the soul, didn’t know what he was talking about. Eyes are curtains to prevent you from seeing. They’re rabbits that climb out of a magician’s hat. Eyes are the last thing you see smiling before a bullet slams into your midsection. I’ll take pulse rate over eyes as clues any day of the week, and my rate was up.
She slid closer.
Ben Leiter 